My First Peom : " Walking In The Rain " : Writing By "UAE Love

nice one my dear

but i want to tell you the poem is write in this way ^_^ not peom

i hope to see more from you

in English Club

^^ wo0ow its pretty kool keep on

محاولة جميله جدا
لكن أختي اذا تقدرين تستخدمين microsoft word لتصحيح بعض الأخطاء الاملائيه
والسموحه

Thanks for sharing & well done it is just begining & Inshallah you will gain more knowledge and write better onse
Only some grammer & spealling mistakes so do not worry I was on that stage 1 day but thankks to Allah that I am not perfect but better
Thanks & would like to read more
Keep it up

1 more thing this is not poeam